Thread:Spooky Rish/@comment-25163519-20140922194905/@comment-25163519-20140925185515

NoobxNoob wrote: Right now, I somehow think that the guides are a bit personal. Sorry, but it's hard for me to explain. E.g. The phrase "you may think ... is overpowered, but after reading this guide you won't anymore". That to me doesn't feel right. I feel like it should be "the ... may be powerful, but this guide will make it easier for you to survive" or something along the lines of that. And there's too many "you" being used IMO. then change it to. "it ay be an over power..."